Sleeping under your Love

for him

and this day never lasted this long

i had you

and the only thing you had to do

was wrap those strong arms of yours

around my fragile demeanor

keep my body safe

keep me warm

until the sun

comes around us again

i'll be

sleeping under your love

like a canopy

Reviews

[PANDORA]

I like how this reads as if catching someone in mid thought. I might change some of the word choices but that is just a suggestion. For example:

and this day never lasted this long...maybe...and this day never lasted so long...or...and this day could linger on


Hope this helps. Thanks for the read.

[FaeryQueen]

thanks for reading!