What Have I Lost?

somewhere along the way

i think i lost who i was

you made me feel real

like i was actually worthwhile

you made me smile

i want you

but it's been so long

and i keep wondering

what have i lost?

Reviews

[Érenn]

Again I must commend you on the brevity. Though this one isn't really about imagery invoked through words yet the way you have arranged them and the way the flow is maintained in this write is very well and what makes this write an honest raw and it packs a punch. Memories of a loved one, now separated in two minds whether to meet or not. Thank you for sharing