Insomnia

Withered away

are the messed up words

in this messed up world

that we live in

everything's dying

and my insomnia

is getting stronger

while i'm slowly 

fading

...

Reviews

[Érenn]

I like the brevity of this piece. That said, your word choices are superb as they invoke imagery. Poignant dark yet true. This is indeed well stated. Love the structure as well. There is no need for me interpret the meaning since it's clearly expressed. Thank you for sharing

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Well...you sum this up rather in a short form...and key in on the moment of thought...as a reader the way this plays out...gives the intent...in which the experience is taken in...yet leaves one to ponder the rest for themselves...insomnia...hits us all...where we go from there...is the question only each individual can answer...