introduction

the forest social classification

In a rainy forest there lived a variety of animals who lived under the law of the forest. The animals were divided into three classes: the wild, but strong animals, including lions,  tigers, wolves, etc...The second class was comprised of the weaker animals like rabbits, deer, rats, etc...What about the third class?  Who belongs here?  Only one animal!  The fox.  This animal is not strong by itself, but it could control the strong wild animals!  That's because it was so smart, but at the same time, it was dishonest, tricky and a liar!  In order to live, it didn't care if others died!  Perhaps he was happier if others died so he can enjoy the whole forest to himself!  He thought it was the best in the woods.  No other animals can compare with his superiority!  This thought made him never settle because he thought there was no place in the woods that matched his superiority.  But day after day, he got tired of moving, so he decided to settle for some time.  It started to look for a place but all the forest was inhabited at that time

Reviews

[tigerfight]

This reads like a children's book. --I'm not insulting you. Your short, simple sentences would go very nicely with illustrations, I think. Your use of exclamation points is exciting. However, I would shy away from using the word "etc." in prose. I am looking forward to reading the adventures of the fox.

[Pax]

interesting introduction.

[Renée]

Ok starting from the beginning ..I love stories with animals and lessons !