beauty

 

some people are into kids

some may like money

others love power and authority

but for me, i adore beauty

and you are, extremely pretty

so you are for me, priceless

although i dont know why you are

greedy like this

when God distributed beauty,

you have got all of it

left only small bit

all other creatures share in it

and you even haven't left it

you have got your share even in it

when you are in a street,

all eyes you get

making men feet stuck to the asphelt

not caring they may have an accident

 

when i am asked, what beauty is

i point at you and say....(this)

they reply..no beauty is less

than that found in this

but what to do?no words in languages

can describe you my mistress!

 

 

Reviews

[smkb90]

I loved it! It was like a trickle of organized thoughts running down the page. Easy to follow, short sharp ideas, but the meaning behind it all tied it together nicely. Thank you!

["Longing from Ages"]

your words are in sync with your thoughts.........beautifully defined...thanks for the good write.

[The dark story]

this poem is replete with emotions which are just flowing in it.it is such a beautiful poem.and the way you have described beauty is something excellent....i really love reading your poems.....infinity likes

[JadeForever]

I loved this! The title itself had got me to click on this poem and I'm glad I did. Your descriptions are well done. The whole poem flows well and it was easy to catch on and read. Once again, well done!

-Jade

[Michael X]

wow, this is a great piece, the flow pulls the reader further and further into
the depth of the try, trying to describe that which is undefined, excellent

[Lady of the Ring]

touching, yet mysterious. great hook in the beginning

[Pax]

nice and very intriguing.

[Catherine Schythe]

Interesting poem Khalid:-) "Others love power and authority but for me, i adore beauty" I love that line along with some other ones you used. I like how you identify beauty. Your humble nature can be seen through your words.

[AnneMatt10]

Yep, that's what love is like. Masha'Allah.
Thank you.

[Kenya Hunter :) :)]

Gorgeous! Absolutely Gorgeous!