hey you2

hey you2

A Poem by khalid
"

fun

"

 

hey you..

oh no...

if you dont know, 

let me tell you! 

 

i was a teenager when

you were still

a baby in its cradle

 

i was an adult

when you used to

suck your mother's n****e

 

i was a man

when you were drinking

your milk in a baby bottle

 

i was a knight

when you were scared

to watch a movie about a battle

 

i was an utterer

when you were

saying "uker" for sugar

 

i was responsible

when you were

still using a diapper

 

and now against me

you come to challenge!

think i would

go into such a battle?

 

it is immoral for a president,

to challenge a little soldier.

 

it is inferior for a lion,

to fight against a humster.

 

it is dishonor for a master,

to insult a beggar

 

throw away your chewing gum

and then go to your mum

your bed time has already gone

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2012 khalid


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khalid
for fun

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sounds like you''re putting a proud ambitious youth in his place. it is done with the dignity of a seasoned gentleman. obviously this boy has no respect for his superiors...perhaps its to avenge his father...it is very funny, nonetheless. it's good to see you writing again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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haha! This is so great.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really good! It applies to so many people I know. I like it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


sounds like you''re putting a proud ambitious youth in his place. it is done with the dignity of a seasoned gentleman. obviously this boy has no respect for his superiors...perhaps its to avenge his father...it is very funny, nonetheless. it's good to see you writing again.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha this is amusing. Good write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Hahaha this is awesome. I like how you put the character in its place. Really good write =D

Posted 12 Years Ago



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khalid

October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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