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hey you...

hey you...

A Poem by khalid
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just for fun

"

 

 

If you think you are a heroine,
I am the known hero
If you think you are a noble lady,
I am the great pharaoh
If you see yourself as Cleopatra,
I am the brave Antonio
If you think you are Juliet,
I am the crazy Romeo

if you are a footballer,

i am Christiano Ronaldo
If you think you are a meal,
I am the whole menu
If you are a panda,
I am the forest of bamboo
If you are a cheetah,
I am the strong Leo
If you are a soap,
I am a bottle of shampoo
if you are a sheet of paper,

i am the prfect portfolio

if you are a story,

i am the exciting senario

if you are an erotica poem,

i am the dictionary of taboo

 

i am the sun, you are the shadow

i am origional, you are a false tatoo

so

you must know

with whom you come to argue

before you lose the rest of your mind and then no,

other body can help you

to bear the flames of the dragon burning you

 

 

 

© 2012 khalid


Author's Note

khalid
just for fun...

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"so you must know with whom you come to argue..." Love this line.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh Very fun ! I delighted in this one !

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is very entertaining to read :) I enjoyed reading it.

My favorite lines:

"I am the sun, you are the shadow
I am original, you are a false tatoo". Those lines really speak to me:) I bet it was fun writing this piece.
Fantastic!


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was fun indeed, I like how creative it is. I saw some misspellings but other then that, it was good; I enjoyed this. I like this part here:
"If you are a soap,
I am a bottle of shampoo"

Posted 12 Years Ago


Amazing job! It's powerful and keeps you going until the last punctuation. keep it up! :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


fun and light. a poem to definitely cheer someone up on a bad day. nice job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Entertaining and witty.. =) very nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


If the guys I know could think of something this clever, I'd probably fall for them in an instant. It's very amusing, romantic, and witty. Thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is very clever and witty. i like the counterparts to each person or item. it's enough to win any woman. it's endearingly amusing and romantic at once. for me, it's important for a man to make me laugh and woo me. and this poem would do so. excellent job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Well this was indeed interesting...loved the opposing and the response theme..and the responses were great...My favorite is... If you think you are a meal, I am the whole menu



Posted 12 Years Ago



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khalid

October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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