fool idol

worst when you love someone who is in love

For long time,
My heart has been
Beating of love to her
So I decided to declare
How much i do really love her
So, to dinner in a romantic place,
I have invited her
The night before;
Shaved my beard
My ever best suit,
Was what I wore

 

What a place!
Very nice breeze
Romantic music
While we were sitting

 face to face
Shall I now tell her
About what I feel?
I started to feel my heart dancing
When she started, to tell me
About the secret she wanted
Me to share
That I am nice,
I always care
Sure!
Tell me! Let me share!

 

She started to tell me..
How much she loves him
And she wants me to help her
To be able to be with him
Oh no…
Who turned off the light?
Or that's me who got blind?
Where am i? what happened?
She continued..
I have already heard
He is your friend
So I need your recommend
Let him notice me…

Why doesn’t she just stop?
How can I make her shut up??
Her voice which always was musical
Relaxing, comforting, peaceful
Is now my ever most dreadful
If she was a human being,
She would be more careful,
Or felt how much it is painful
To talk only about him
While she was with another one
If she has some sense
Some little intelligence
She would observe
My annoyance
While she throws her bombs
She turned to be a hell stone
On me it was thrown
Burning the deepest in me!
He is my friend, shall I tell her
The truth behind him?
That for him, she isn’t the first one?
And she can never be
The last one
What if I tell her, and she tells him?
I will lose him then
And for her, she is already lost
When she fell in him
And now for me, she is completely forbidden
Let time then show us what would happen
And for me, it was killed
The love that
Never begun 

Author's Note

just written it

Reviews

[3110843110843110]

Your heart is full of love.. your words sing..

These words will reach a deserving heart.. in time...

[Geraldine]

Awww,, bittersweet. ^^ I so loved the transition you did. :D I was like smiling reading the first few lines until I was saddened in the latter. Yay! Great job my friend.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Unrequited love... so bittersweet. To be in love with someone and not have the same affection in return can be heartbreaking.
In the end you didn't tell her... that would be a challenge within itself... what if?...
Isn't she worth the risk?

[Suditi]

This is so sad..The emotions are so raw..
A touching poem.

[Renée]

What a heart breaking write...you captured the moment perfectly ! What a difficult situation you wrote of..as if it was happening right now..I do hope it isn't..

[Katty]

This is a sad Yet a Beautiful Piece, I do adore it. It has so much truth and is very touching. Love it. My Heart Is Hurting...

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and very compelling piece, well done, good read.

[Serena Kaye]

Ouch. Love how you began it so well with a passion of love, then shot us all with a surprise with her love towards the friend. Sad, but really heartfelt, and shows a bit of anger through all the pain. I love how you wrote this!

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oh wow.....ouch.. this is probably one of the worst pains of love...
how this strikes my heart!!! Such a painful poem here. awwww....
the sadness..the agony... gosh...
But i love how you crafted this poem. Really very heartfelt!!!