egypt ency. history, pharaonic, new kingdom

new kingdom with great pharaohs

The sun
At noon
Is very high
Meaning it is
Getting ready
To say goodbye
 great pharaohs
of middle kingdom
got their firewell way
starting a new weakness era
in which Egypt got, ever weakest
enemies from Asia dared to conquer it
for pharaohs, only left place was Thebes
until appeared the courage pharaoh, Ahmose
 reunited the country and defeated the Hyksos
starting the world's ever most amazing kingdom
 lasted for five centuries, from 18th to 20th dynasties
including  great  Ahmose, Amenhotup and tuhotmos
Hatshepsut,  the first ever known queen in the world
Akhenaten, first  into monotheism, called his god,  Aten
And the amazing (boy king) Tutankhamen, was king at 9
 although at eighteen he died, his tomb lately discovered
five thousand items mostly made of gold in it were found
until came Ramses II, ever greatest and strongest pharaoh
whose  temple's  miracle still challenging the whole world
that  the sun still vertically shines on his statue's face twice,
 October 21st  on his birthday, February 21st, his  coronation
He  is known to be having, the most statues among pharaohs
With his pretty wife queen Nefertari, together built temples
That can be seen, all over Egypt, specially Abu simbel Temple
Although it is said Ramsses II was the pharaoh at time of Mossa
But he was the ever greatest pharaoh and his still found mummy
Which is the best example on the miracle of mummification
Which will be ever science challenging as an example
On a civilization which has led the whole world
 

Author's Note

clay jars were mostly distinguishing the new kingdom, i wrote it as a message in a bottle to throw it through internet to all who dont know about it. thank you

Reviews

[Renée]

You have really found away to stand out from the herd ! Love the bottle and its contents ! Never knew about the sun shining on Ramses ll ...Your giving me the travel bug ! lol

[Geraldine]

very clever structure. hha it's really cute. :D this really gives your reader a chance to know more about egypt. :D interesting and informative.

[Mockingbird]

this is a great piece. it really could be an entry in an encyclopedia. i'm really not familiar with the pharaohs and this gives a succinct lesson for those of us who have no knowledge on the subject and also of their accomplishments. it is very thorough in naming all the pharaohs and what they are most known for. thank you.

[MOON]

Love the bottle and the contents . Lovely history lesson.

[patricia]

I found the monotheism history very interesting, the shape of the bottle you gave this is a work of art too. Fun to read whilst being educated. I can see you have put a lot of work into this, you have a lot to be proud of with your countrys origins and history. Great write. Enjoyed.

[Suditi]

You amaze me.
Amazing write.
The style is superb.
The content..it is very informative..
Great write.