egypt ency. history, pharaonic, new kingdom

new kingdom with great pharaohs

The sun
At noon
Is very high
Meaning it is
Getting ready
To say goodbye
 great pharaohs
of middle kingdom
got their firewell way
starting a new weakness era
in which Egypt got, ever weakest
enemies from Asia dared to conquer it
for pharaohs, only left place was Thebes
until appeared the courage pharaoh, Ahmose
 reunited the country and defeated the Hyksos
starting the world's ever most amazing kingdom
 lasted for five centuries, from 18th to 20th dynasties
including  great  Ahmose, Amenhotup and tuhotmos
Hatshepsut,  the first ever known queen in the world
Akhenaten, first  into monotheism, called his god,  Aten
And the amazing (boy king) Tutankhamen, was king at 9
 although at eighteen he died, his tomb lately discovered
five thousand items mostly made of gold in it were found
until came Ramses II, ever greatest and strongest pharaoh
whose  temple's  miracle still challenging the whole world
that  the sun still vertically shines on his statue's face twice,
 October 21st  on his birthday, February 21st, his  coronation
He  is known to be having, the most statues among pharaohs
With his pretty wife queen Nefertari, together built temples
That can be seen, all over Egypt, specially Abu simbel Temple
Although it is said Ramsses II was the pharaoh at time of Mossa
But he was the ever greatest pharaoh and his still found mummy
Which is the best example on the miracle of mummification
Which will be ever science challenging as an example
On a civilization which has led the whole world
 

Author's Note

clay jars were mostly distinguishing the new kingdom, i wrote it as a message in a bottle to throw it through internet to all who dont know about it. thank you

Reviews

[Lady of the Ring]

i don't like history that much, but that was easy to read and understand. thank you for sharing. (i really like the clay jar thing)

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

I'm not much of a history buff but I really enjoyed this. It's really interesting. I especially love the way you've presented it. The clay jar thing is really cool.

[Khal Attero]

Love it, brilliant work! Long live Egypt!

[Bill R.]

Very clever presentation and good content. I love Egyptian History anyway, but this is so interesting to me. I Thank You for writing, "outside the box."

[Thea]

Wow...You brought knowledge to us here...A brilliant and well written piece...Great job!
:)))

[Coyote Poetry]

I saw the beautiful temples of Egypt. I knew part of their story. The old world had great history and mystery. Funny part of history. It is repeated often. A wise leader would know world history to understand his world. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[3110843110843110]

Oh...

What an epic...

[Sabrina Ann Bliss]

I do like this, although, it is the type of poetry I don't really "get." Good work!

[Bidu Ibrahim]

You've really poured the content of your bottle of information into my head! Very interesting and informative. Keep it up Khalid and thanks for sharing.

[Cree Nations]

Words are great, the format was not so easy for me. But I love the words and the flow. Thank you