just go

just go

A Poem by khalid
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sometimes you like to sometimes to just leave you

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You have never shown me
Any kind of interest
And you want me to make you
Feel you are the best!
That is really mean
Just think of it
You have finished your masters in hurting
And in causing pain, you got the degree of doctorate
That you have become a consultant
 in how to make people kneel
But if you have some sense you would feel
I have broken the chain
To which You kept my heart tied
You threaten of leaving
Why don’t you? just do it!
Don’t you know you have turned
To be a heavy rock on my chest?
I can no longer breathe because of it!
Just feeling you are there,
 make me feel much annoyed!
I wonder since you wanted to leave,
 why again you stayed!
I want you to leave
I want you to go
I want to close my eyes
And when back I open them
I find you have left

i want to hear from you, just one word

repeat after me if you dont know it

g o o d b y e , it is easy, isnt it?
I want to replace
you by emptiness!
I want myself to be
Back to me
Only one thing I want you
To take with you
When you go
Just take the feelings
Spoiled by you
Leave me, go!

© 2012 khalid


Author's Note

khalid
thank you for reading( btw, what i write doesnt mean it is really about my own experiences, i try to express others' feelings, i try to be some others' tongue. )

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I love how this poem is simply straight forward. I have had personal experiences like this, and that is exactly how I have felt through them. The emotion is captured beautifully. And it makes me feel for the person saying these things. Thank you for this poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Strong and honest words in this poem. Hard to find someone with the same desire and on the same path. A lot of sadness in the poem. I did like the directness and the very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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