just go

sometimes you like to sometimes to just leave you

You have never shown me
Any kind of interest
And you want me to make you
Feel you are the best!
That is really mean
Just think of it
You have finished your masters in hurting
And in causing pain, you got the degree of doctorate
That you have become a consultant
 in how to make people kneel
But if you have some sense you would feel
I have broken the chain
To which You kept my heart tied
You threaten of leaving
Why don’t you? just do it!
Don’t you know you have turned
To be a heavy rock on my chest?
I can no longer breathe because of it!
Just feeling you are there,
 make me feel much annoyed!
I wonder since you wanted to leave,
 why again you stayed!
I want you to leave
I want you to go
I want to close my eyes
And when back I open them
I find you have left

i want to hear from you, just one word

repeat after me if you dont know it

g o o d b y e , it is easy, isnt it?
I want to replace
you by emptiness!
I want myself to be
Back to me
Only one thing I want you
To take with you
When you go
Just take the feelings
Spoiled by you
Leave me, go!

Author's Note

thank you for reading( btw, what i write doesnt mean it is really about my own experiences, i try to express others' feelings, i try to be some others' tongue. )

Reviews

[Lady of the Ring]

i don't know what to say about this. i feel as if you have taken my feelings and made them into music.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Wow. It's awesome. I love the way compared causing pain to to education. Epic.

Simply wonderful write

[Corey Coreys]

This is so powerful and so great! I love the short, powerful lines! It how a very strong wording too. Great job again :)

[Jadey]

Wow! what a strong emotions. Well written.

[Belle]

Very pushy piece!
It is hard to write somebody else' emotion,but
you were able to pen here the most non imaginable strong words
that will push the unwanted away.
Well expressed!

[Emilie Barn]

Nice poetry. And most of all, the thing that you 'try to be some other's tongue' means that you have the ability to 'feel in their skin'. It's really rare. Good job. Keep it up =))

[Lady Raven]

"But if you have some sense you would feel
I have broken the chain
To which You kept my heart tied" is a great series of lines. Shows that the narrator has some power. Nice.

[jennifer little]

nice poetry good job keep up the good work thanks for sharing with me

[Cree Nations]

a very good read. thank you.