lost love

lost love

A Poem by khalid
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Don’t feel bad
Don’t feel sad
Don’t pity on me

 

Don’t feel guilty
Don’t blame yourself
For not feeling me

 

If  you need to name
The person whom to blame
 Just blame me

 

It wasn’t your fault,
 That is me who failed
 To make you feel me

 

You are a hunter
I am the prey
In your net

 I wanted to be

 

Never you have chased
Never you have tried
To hunt me

 

But with my full will

with complete desire
I have thrown myself
On your way

 

You always tried to be

careful not to
Step on me

 

You have warned me
You have asked me
To go away

 

But in your net
I liked to rest for a bit
Not caring what would
Happen to me

 

I know now you want to
Step on me
in order that you can

continue your way

 

I was  an obstacle
Blocking your way
So now please
Just forgive me

 

I don’t need you to fear
I don’t want you to care
For what may happen to me

 

Forget all your pity
Just be happy
this is really
happiness for me

 

and if one day

you feel you miss your prey

return back

you will find me

still on the way

waiting for you

to hunt me..

 

© 2012 khalid


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To be the hunted is good and bad. Sometime the hunted can find a dead-end with no exit. I did like the story in this poem. I believe better to escape and taste life then wait to be the prey once more. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is so sad for the prey, having such true love for the hunter that it's willing to be trampled upon for the hunter's happiness. by supplicating the hunter then finally conceding after many attempts that he just isn't wanted, shows self-sacrifice and a quiet dignity about him. and to still say he'll be there for her indicates the sincerity of his love.

Posted 12 Years Ago


that is so sad, that I have no words!
really its true feeling...

Posted 12 Years Ago


oh.. very interesting write. ^^ smooth flow and nice theme. ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


this seems to be a fairly common theme in your writings. as usual, very well written, nice flow and very unique images. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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