lost love

hmmm

Don’t feel bad
Don’t feel sad
Don’t pity on me

 

Don’t feel guilty
Don’t blame yourself
For not feeling me

 

If  you need to name
The person whom to blame
 Just blame me

 

It wasn’t your fault,
 That is me who failed
 To make you feel me

 

You are a hunter
I am the prey
In your net

 I wanted to be

 

Never you have chased
Never you have tried
To hunt me

 

But with my full will

with complete desire
I have thrown myself
On your way

 

You always tried to be

careful not to
Step on me

 

You have warned me
You have asked me
To go away

 

But in your net
I liked to rest for a bit
Not caring what would
Happen to me

 

I know now you want to
Step on me
in order that you can

continue your way

 

I was  an obstacle
Blocking your way
So now please
Just forgive me

 

I don’t need you to fear
I don’t want you to care
For what may happen to me

 

Forget all your pity
Just be happy
this is really
happiness for me

 

and if one day

you feel you miss your prey

return back

you will find me

still on the way

waiting for you

to hunt me..

 

Author's Note

just written it

Reviews

[luviva]

ohhhhhhh this is so sad khalid!
never seen you so vulnerable like this.. is this what Love really does to people?
i loved it.. you know the wording just fits. you the prey and her the hunter?
dont you think it should have been the other way round?

[khalid]

thank you for your nice review, i didnt write it about my own experience, i write about others'feelings as well..thanks again

[Renée]

If she is smart...she will return for the one who waits... Simple beauty in words

[Emilie Barn]

Beautiful words, true feelings, emotionality... Really nice job =))

[Shy Girl]

This piece has sadness, yes, but I always try to look beyond that...you are trying so hard to connect with this lady that you're willing to be "a deer in the headlights" in her life. Right there unable to be missed or passed by any longer. It seems as you are the one lost here...lost as to how to make her see you again..for you not as a tool for her emotional ups and downs..Your expression was very vivid and extremely heartfelt...I liked the way you broke down each individual thought. They each had their own meaning really and near the ending tied together if you read it over again as I did twice. Hopefully she hears you and tries to find you again..and not let you drift in question as to her feelings. This was a very lovely piece.. really :)

[Melati]

Sorry Khalid, I did not check my grammar and I am falling as sleep. Trust me, she is waiting for you to find her. Her cares and loves for you is sincere very much so. But now it is up to you. You are the only want who could decide or maybe you should contemplate.

[Melati]

Khalid, I do not think the hunter would like to be the hunter any longer. I think if you truly love her... the hunter would prefer you to find her. I think this time she might wants you to be the hunter and she prefer to be the prey. I believe, if you trully wanted her and to see her, you could find her at her favorite cafe. You might know allready what days she will be there. Maybe this week or next week, when she is ready to be there.....you will see her again. She will be happy whatever you decide, because her loves to you is sincered. Very nice poem!

[Thea]

There's such sad essence in this poem...I guess this came from your heart while writing it...Your words are full of sincerity and beauty...Very well expressed. Great piece of art, Khalid. Keep it up!
:)))

[SuicidePact.]

beautiful words

[Andrew Vaughn]

very nice enjoyed it

[Bidu Ibrahim]

A very interesting and thought provoking piece Khalid! Keep up with the good work man.