go away

love the one who loves you

Just remember how often I have warned you
Of falling in me
How often I told you that you will gain only pain
If you loved me
But you said you don’t care for pain if that pain
Is for the sake of me
I told you I am a crust
You said you love to live in it
I told you I am the sin
You said from me you never wanna be forgiven
I told you I am the devil
You said to me you love to travel
So, bare feet, towards me you crossed long way
Until you have come to a very narrow bay
All kinds of danger are there
But still you don’t care
I don’t know what kind is your heart
Why from me you never get hurt?
Is that real love?
Or you just challenge your heart?
If I were you, I would get rid of my heart
For causing that pain to me
Please just turn over, just go back
Don’t cross that bay
Don’t try to come to me
Because I am sure you can't
Ever reach me
If my heart belongs to me
I would happily give it to you
So just go back
Don’t try to reach me
Try to find another way
In which you wouldn’t find such a bay
Then you may
Find a heart which is free
Where you can be
As happy as you are supposed to be
Rather than false hope, of the remains of me

Author's Note

you maybe loving someone while a third one loves you, you feel sympathy but nothing to do

Reviews

[Renée]

Woah that is a tough spot you wrote about ..I admire the strength of the man you paint as he keeps saying go away..I belong to another..that is devotion another quality I admire...

[Geraldine]

I really could feel the emotions in here. The pain, uncertainty and all, you made it all so alive. Amazing write.

[ghost writer]

a powerful and emotive read..love is a delicate flower which blooms only in the right conditions..

[recantichize]

wow. very strong emotions regarding yourself. but a lovely story of love and devotion. or
maybe of naivety and blind following. i like that you've left it kind of ambiguous. well written!

[Thea]

Hmm...That's so true...It's hard when you're loving someone else and then another person loves you...Ugh...Dealing with such kind of situation like this isn't that easy...This was totally a great read. Well done, Khalid!
:)))

[Bidu Ibrahim]

A very interesting and powerful poem from a unique perspective Khalid! Good job man, keep it up.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

its too sad..I just dont have words to say...but real and truth...
~nia~

[Sleeping Maiden]

Such an interesting write. Yes, it's quite difficult when a third person falls while you love someone else. mmhmm. I like the honesty of your words. It's very strong. A moving piece! Very well written. Great write!

[Mockingbird]

this can be a dilemma indeed. however you have made yourself plain that you love only one person and would never betray her trust. how did you even meet this second woman anyway? when it comes to that department, i believe a man is only a man; he will cheat. but there may be exceptions, like in your case. it's so funny how you kick her to the curb. good thing you're not the kind of man that has a harem. i love your poems, they are like true anecdotes.

[?]

loving someone while a third one loves you....hmmmm....could be
This is another heartfelt piece from you...thought provoking too