love coat

love can never be bought

 

Baby I know you feel so cold

Come on let me wrap you

with my coat

My coat is not cotton made

My coat is not wool made

My coat is not silk made

My coat is just, love made

But really it is unique

Because it was made

Specially for you

My coat was tried

By many others before you

On some, it looked wide

On some, it looked tight

But it suits only........ you

Author's Note

you always feel that your love is made only for your beloved...

Reviews

[Renée]

Quite a different view of love..a warm caring view ..

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

I love it. Comparing love to a warm coat. It's ingenious.

[Bidu Ibrahim]

That's an interesting coat Khalid! This is very powerful stuff Khalid. Good job.

[recantichize]

this is beautiful! very emotive and tender. it would make any heart melt to hear that! thank you for this lovely piece.

[angelina neves]

Lovely! Those are the best coats we can have!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Its so sweet, romantic and real...!
~nia~

[SuicidePact.]

aww

[Sleeping Maiden]

ha ha, awww i love this..

great write!

It's true.. sometimes we feel that way. Only one person can be the "Only one"....
No one else can take away that love..

[?]

awww...a coat made from the heart...with the heart..a coat that only fits one..
Beautiful...

[Mockingbird]

when you meet your soul mate it's almost as though the two of you fit physically, spiritually and bodily. there can be no other. you described all that in few words. i guess that's all you need. excellent poem.