love coat

love coat

A Poem by khalid
"

love can never be bought

"

 

Baby I know you feel so cold

Come on let me wrap you

with my coat

My coat is not cotton made

My coat is not wool made

My coat is not silk made

My coat is just, love made

But really it is unique

Because it was made

Specially for you

My coat was tried

By many others before you

On some, it looked wide

On some, it looked tight

But it suits only........ you

© 2012 khalid


Author's Note

khalid
you always feel that your love is made only for your beloved...

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Quite a different view of love..a warm caring view ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love it. Comparing love to a warm coat. It's ingenious.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That's an interesting coat Khalid! This is very powerful stuff Khalid. Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


this is beautiful! very emotive and tender. it would make any heart melt to hear that! thank you for this lovely piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely! Those are the best coats we can have!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Its so sweet, romantic and real...!
~nia~

Posted 12 Years Ago


aww

Posted 12 Years Ago


ha ha, awww i love this..

great write!

It's true.. sometimes we feel that way. Only one person can be the "Only one"....
No one else can take away that love..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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awww...a coat made from the heart...with the heart..a coat that only fits one..
Beautiful...

Posted 12 Years Ago


when you meet your soul mate it's almost as though the two of you fit physically, spiritually and bodily. there can be no other. you described all that in few words. i guess that's all you need. excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on March 31, 2012
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October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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