love girl

love girl

A Poem by khalid
"

you may fall in a person on whom many others have fallen!

"

 

When they ask me..

Your love girl

Who is she?

I have to run away

Because I feel too jealous to say

That my love girl

Is the same girl

Loved by every other one here

 

I know I am not the first one who loves you

I know I wont be the last one who falls in you

And yes..i feel jealous from any other one

Can see you

But I really don’t know, what I am supposed to do

 

You are like the sun,  shines

Everywhere spreading your rays

To capture hearts

so I have to be a cloud,

to hide

you behind

me

so when you shine, you shine only on me

and when it is noon, and your heat is highest grown

and you feel the desire to burn

someone

let him

be me

I know your hot rays are hard to bear

But I don’t care

Even if my body, you tear

That I die for your sake

On my dead body, just write,

This is the one who died

Just for me

Only now I can feel peace

Because your tears

Will put out your rays

And stop them

From

Capturing other hearts

 

© 2012 khalid


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Some woman can make you come alive with the hearing of their voice. The movement of their walk. The love in their eyes. It can feel like danger trying to get close for many had the same desire. A wise man had many dances and many good memories. To know pleasure sometime you must know pain. A very interesting poem. Take no chances. Know no glory.
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its really amazing as all your poems, so imaginary and full of energy! and with sun too :) I love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i enjoyed this write, nicely expressed

Posted 12 Years Ago


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The thrill of winning and the anticipation can be intoxicating!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some woman can make you come alive with the hearing of their voice. The movement of their walk. The love in their eyes. It can feel like danger trying to get close for many had the same desire. A wise man had many dances and many good memories. To know pleasure sometime you must know pain. A very interesting poem. Take no chances. Know no glory.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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khalid

October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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