love girl

you may fall in a person on whom many others have fallen!

 

When they ask me..

Your love girl

Who is she?

I have to run away

Because I feel too jealous to say

That my love girl

Is the same girl

Loved by every other one here

 

I know I am not the first one who loves you

I know I wont be the last one who falls in you

And yes..i feel jealous from any other one

Can see you

But I really don’t know, what I am supposed to do

 

You are like the sun,  shines

Everywhere spreading your rays

To capture hearts

so I have to be a cloud,

to hide

you behind

me

so when you shine, you shine only on me

and when it is noon, and your heat is highest grown

and you feel the desire to burn

someone

let him

be me

I know your hot rays are hard to bear

But I don’t care

Even if my body, you tear

That I die for your sake

On my dead body, just write,

This is the one who died

Just for me

Only now I can feel peace

Because your tears

Will put out your rays

And stop them

From

Capturing other hearts

 

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some woman can make you come alive with the hearing of their voice. The movement of their walk. The love in their eyes. It can feel like danger trying to get close for many had the same desire. A wise man had many dances and many good memories. To know pleasure sometime you must know pain. A very interesting poem. Take no chances. Know no glory.
Coyote

[Renée]

Devotion in Love...not often seen but a treasure when shared... Beautiful song Khalid ( :

[Everett DeValle]

Awesome write Khalid, I always enjoy reading other romantics...this poem just reminded me of Taj Mahal, where an emperor from India constructed a marble mausoleum for his love of his wife that had past away...simply put, a good woman can make men do wonders. :)

[?]

and when the sun shines on you it is warming and breathtaking.

Well written and expressed

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awwww...i love this! Great poem!
Oh the agony of love... >.< it's torture yes...
especially when the person one loves has been an interest among the rest..
Well, this is really really GOOD! I love your work!

[SuicidePact.]

this was expressed well.

[stars are far]

This was your BEST ...
I really loved this so muccccccchhhhhhh :D

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I like it - it is very different, unique.
Beautiful words - especially the ending of writing
upon you , tears putting out this girls rays as to capture no more hearts.

Chloe

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Very good! Great poem =)

[Mockingbird]

expresses your deep sentiments. great use of symbolism. how could these words not woo a girl. the way you give her reassurances, she could never feel insecure in your love for her.