i wish

 

I wish I were a burning fire

 in your cold winter nights

So you like

To get closer

To feel my warmth

I wish I were a cold sea

 in your hot summer's noon

So you like

to throw yourself

in my big hug

to cool down your heat

I wish I were a candle

Burn

To

Lighten your room

I wish I were a sheet of paper

On which

You draw your sweet words

I wish I were your mirror

In which you look

To see the moon

Smiling back to you

I wish I were that pillow

Every night with you

I wish I were anything that touches you

I wish I were anything that can see you

I wish I wish I wish I wish..

I wish to be with you

Author's Note

as well as we live, we dream and wish

Reviews

[Renée]

writing like this.. how can you not get all your wishes! lol ..I enjoy reading your simple & sweet way of writing romance

[khalid]

thank you Renee for all your sweet reviews and comments..

[Renée]

My pleasure. ( :

[khalid]

umm ok..

[Everett DeValle]

I always remember a quote from the movie, Rudy..."Having dreams is what makes life tolerable." It was Rudy's best friend that told him to follow his dream to play football in Notre Dame, and sadly his best friend dies in a freak accident in the company they worked for together...your poem reminded me of that favorite quote...that's what amazes me with poetry and other poets such as yourself, I read a poem and it becomes my own with my own thoughts and memories.

Splendid write.

[recantichize]

you write such beautiful and unique love poems! i really enjoy them.

[Melati]

Excellent poem and tell the person that you love how much you wanted to be with her. Keep writing my friend...

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice wishes and desire in the poem. I like the many desires wanted in this wonderful poem of love. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[stars are far]

This was so sweet,romantic,and wonderful written :D
Keep that coming :)

[hmm]

Quite a wonderful read here, I enjoyed this. Found it powerful

[Sugar Plum ♥]

yess...It`s amazing ,wonderful and so romantic!! I love all your poems, Khalid!

[Bidu Ibrahim]

If wishes were horses,.......... they say! Very interesting and powerful Khalid

[Mockingbird]

again this is another beautiful poem. you really know how to woo a girl with your sweet words. i wonder if the poems are dedicated to particular girls or to just one. it's romantic otherwise.