caring

is caring enough to get love?

 

I hear your silence

I see you even if my eyes are closed

I feel your presence

Either you are far away or so closed

I breathe your essence

Specially when no perfume is used

I can feel your tense

When you start to feel bored

You are my compass

You can direct my mood

So it doesn’t make sense

When you can't find your road

And you get in a mess

That you heartily pray to Lord

To give you strength

To lighten your load

Even if this load

Is

me

Reviews

[Denied in Truth]

Great job!

[hmm]

Interesting read here, I like it.
love the ending, leaves room for hope.

[SuicidePact.]

this was interesting, thanks for sharing

[Coyote Poetry]

A very interesting poem. I like the desire and the direction of this poem.
"And you get in a mess
That you heartily pray to Lord
To give you strength
To lighten your load
Even if this load"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote