messages from hell

if the criminal thinks what he may face later, he wouldnt sin

 

Three of the people of the hell gathered one day

Everyone had a story, he wanted to say

To save others from joining them one day

 

First one: I  have done every possible sin

I have cheated, betrayed and even stolen

All I cared, was gathering money, I never given anyone

If I met a needy, away I used to run

But when I died, I left it all behind

For others to enjoy it, while I burn because of it

So I don’t, want anyone

To do what I have done

 

The second one: I never respected my dad and mom

I have always been so cruel to them

Although they wanted me to be a good one,

They were very merciful with me but I  never cared for them

So I don’t want anyone

To do what I have done

 

The third: have always been cruel to everyone

Always fighting, I thought im the strongest one

And if I felt I was to be beaten,

I had to use my gun

Once I shot someone

But then

I found out he has kids and a disabled mom

So I felt shame for what I had done

And I don’t want anyone

To do what I have done

 

Author's Note

just an idia i wanted to share

Reviews

[Renée]

A Very good idea you share ! Causes a person to think!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Great job, very powerful message. Very thought provoking and a real eye opener. Excellent job.

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Wish they could pay us a visit for real! Interesting read Khalid...Well done.

[hmm]

Deep write and powerful. I like this,
makes one think.
We all learn from our mistakes.
Nicely done!

[EMMIE]

Great idea! I hope people reading this can take some advice from it. Be the best person you can be really unique, never read anything like this before.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Its really amazing writing..even too sad...and cruel somehow

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good poem. We can learn from the errors of others. Most people regret bad deeds done in a life. I enjoy each story. Thank you for the entertaining poem.
Coyote

[Mockingbird]

a lesson to be learned from your poem. we should all try to live moral lives. great work.

[stars are far]

Well... so great work ...
I think that i know the root of this idea ;)
keep it up here :D