Bar of Glass

we all lose bars of glass

 

The closer to her I come

The more she pushed me away

And when I ask her

What have I done?

Just don’t touch me

I ask …. what is my sin?

She can't find anything to say

 I have to stay still

Will I come closer or do I

Have to go away?

deeply I start to think then

if she really feels me

now doubts have begun

to destroy all sweet feelings inside me

maybe her love has gone

it is just night talk, melted with the appearance of the sun

my heart..a loveless bar of glass, at high roof, looked at the floor,

 thought she wants to give him a hug

without thinking, with arms open, he started to quickly fall down

to hug her in return

what a shock! The hug! Was just a trick!

Into little sharp pieces,,,,,he smaaashed

Bare feet, on it I waked, heavily bleed, all my blood I wish I have lost

That blood, her love, by my silly hart for years, was pumped

That from each other, they can't be distinguished

 

So much pain, but I have never  complained

My reddish blood, with the white shiny glass, like poisonous purple rose they looked

Looking nice like her face

killing like her deeds

 

after time, my blood was washed away by rain

to farms it was taken

to feed the fields of jasmine

and I started to adapt to live with my pain

no need for heart, no intention to love again

 

after long time, finding my door knock, went to open it, got shocked

to find her

sitting on the floor

oh ! what a twin! The floor smashed my bar of glass, and the one smashed my heart

opening her arms, asking for a hug!

She didn’t know that, she doesn’t need to make this trick! I'm already smashed

She said, she wants to be

Back to me

I said, it is okay

My pain, I can forget

Your sins, I can forgive

But two things still you have to give

 

Get me back every blood drop

I have lost

And you have to fix

My smashed

Bar of glass

Author's Note

if your bar of glass smashed, dont be sad, that is because it is bad. just be sure to replace it with a better one

Reviews

[Renée]

Beautiful & tragic..the pain..you described it well..the heart shattering..the blood traveling to feed fields of jasmine...then she returns..wanting all to be the same..

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime what we want. Is not good for us. I like the logic and the story in the poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry great job keep up the good work

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A creative piece, looks at the dire need in all of us, well done, good read.

[hmm]

Wow, such a powerful read here,
Wonderfully written. Enjoyed this.

[stars are far]

This was so great ...
Keep that up :D

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s really wonderful poem, even so sad and full with love pain...
but the end is much more optimistic or open?