You

You

A Poem by khalid
"

you are you

"

 

You  still ask me,

 why I love you!!

Have you ever left me,

Any  chance not to?

your river of sweetness

 which on me,

 it used to flow

so  my love tree

 strongly grow

a tree

which roots are deep in my heart

a tree

which branches invade every part

a tree

with love fruits enough to fill big mart

each fruit, has different taste

one tastes love, one tastes adoration ,

 one measures missing rate

but the sweetest fruit taste,

is that fruit

which has

your taste

so don’t ask me

why I love you

because I really don’t

 know

but maybe

I love you

Because you are

 YOU  

 

© 2012 khalid


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khalid
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The questions of love need to be answer daily. We must show with small gifts. The people who are kind enough to be with us. We need them and appreciate them. I enjoyed the poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Ahh Love..it can be so lovely.. Have you left me any chance not to?" A very sweet response..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nice work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


that question has no answer!
when i ask, why do I love?
the answer I get is, I do.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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hmm
This is really wonderful, depth in this write.
Makes one think of what they have.
Awesome write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


very beautiful poem I really loved the way you made it and the way it came out

Posted 12 Years Ago


OMG ... this was so amazing ..
I loved it so much and well the last idea amazing :
"I love you
Because you are
YOU "

Perfect :D





Posted 12 Years Ago


an eloquent and sweet way to convey your love and give reassurance. "...so don't ask me why i love you because i really don't know/but maybe because you are you."
there is nothing that would make a woman feel as special and secure as that statement. great job. very nizar!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really amazing, I like this.
Coyote said it all. Awesome write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can`t beleive..It`s really amazing and I loved the "tree expression" :) I like all poem so much!! thank you...

Posted 12 Years Ago


The questions of love need to be answer daily. We must show with small gifts. The people who are kind enough to be with us. We need them and appreciate them. I enjoyed the poem. A very nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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