3 moons

mmmmmmmmmmm

 

 

When I see your eyes, I feel there are three moons

One is in the sky, far away, for everyone to see

And  in your sweet  eyes, lay the other two

So my queen, I want you to know

That every time you open your eyes,

You are lightening my way

And when you are back to close them,

In complete darkness you put me

 

When I see you, I feel confused

Am I in my sweetest dream, or I am awake?

So baby please, if I am sleeping, never up wake me

And if I really see you, never to bed let me

All I want is to feel…that  I am with you

So let me in whatever state, you are with me

If I have long sleep, don’t think that I need to eat, so up you wake me

Or that for long time I have been awake, so to bed you let me

I will be happy in whatever state, you are with me

Author's Note

just..written it

Reviews

[durrya]

so beautiful, lovely.
i like three moons concept.

[khalid]

adding you, they become four

[durrya]

Aw thanks. humbled.

[khalid]

you are very welcome

[Renée]

Tender & Beautiful like a dream

[Hotwater]

No dessert needed... this will do nicely! Well done.
*bird*

[Jeff]

Awesome poem. Great description of love and joy.

[Mockingbird]

very beautifully written. usually a woman's eyes are compared to the suns. this is very unique. the moon is a much more feminine aspect in the universe. lovely poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful use of the moon and the woman eyes. You create a good place and described happiness and joy in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Benyoucef]

That's pure poetry, vey nice

[stars are far]

So great.. And sweet love..
=D

[....]

I really enjoyed this write, i agree it's really romantic.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I loved it! Its so romantic, poetic and I can feel all inside! like from water spring...