I LOVE YOU

love is the permanent fact

Maybe the sunshine can make the moon,

 forget the hug of the night.

 

Or heavy clouds make stars,

 forget how much they are bright.

 

And people could make" Mary",

 forget her only son's sight.

 

Or a ride on a noble horse,

  makes him forget his only knight.

 

And a kite in a child's hand,

 makes a pilot forget his first flight.

 

And birds may live in the sea,

 while fish fly out of sight.

 

And a left-handed person,

Can use only his right.

 

And a crow looking at a mirror,

Seeing himself very white.

 

The only permanent fact is that;

If I am the moon, you are my orbit, you are my night.

If I am a star, you are the one who makes me look bright

If I am a pilot, you are my most important flight.

You are my sight,

Without you, I am blind.

You are my light,

If you are away, I am in the dark side.

I LOVE YOU, this is the fact, I can never hide

 

Author's Note

hope you like it

Reviews

[Renée]

So sweetly said he...

[....]

I really enjoyed this write I found it touching and sincere. Like the way it's set up.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

its amazing and so touching...

[A]

This is very sweet, full of tender loving feelings, the certainty of love conveyed in the several images you used through out the poem,
excellent, keep writing :)

[stars are far]

so sweet and nice ...
It was perfect :)

[Hotwater]

Yes I do, super love poem with a difference, well done to you.
*bird*