romantic time

moments of romance are difficult to be forgoten

 

A  house of romance"  for you,  I've built"

In which you are,   the only inhabitant

 walls painted, some in purple,some in pink

No need for lights,  nice candles are lit

Flowers, perfumes, everywhere are smelt

With comfortable chairs, couches and bed

From the best stores,  picked a nice gift

 all world love in my heart ,for you, I felt

on the couch next to me, you are to sit

on the sea of darkness covering your head,

my fingers started to float, then deeply sink

looking at the magic in your eyes, I got lost

my hands round your face, softly, touching it

your lips are a cup of wine, let me taste it

 more I taste, more I want, until got drunk

shaking like a snake after a trial to be hit

looking at candles, while they slowly melt

 hot, burning, though with tears they're wet

did candles feel like me, or of them, I felt?

They are about to finish, but I just started

shall I continue? Or do I have to stop it?

Author's Note

shall i continue or do i have to stop it?

Reviews

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you have to ask? oh no do continue.....

[Renée]

You have set the stage and her as center of your attentions..Very romantic.. I like the way you ended with a question...

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

Very romantic. Wonderfully imagery. I can see the candles dripping wax.

[....]

that is up to you my friend, This is really well written.
I loved the powerful ending, awesome job!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

its sweet, romantic and somehow painful...the last sentence or your question makes you go back to the ground :)

[Dove]

Do what your heart tells you to do!! And this poem was great, I'm so serious and the flow was really good.

[paradise]

Really likfed this great write :)

[god is not great, I am]

Sounds like something born from innocence, something that dies with the first light of reality.

[stars are far]

This was so romantic ...:)
and you shall do what your heart ask for :D