I AM YOURS

I AM YOURS

A Poem by khalid

I am yours, try to be mine

In my darkness, I wait you shine

Only when with you, I feel I'm fine

On my life way, you are the important sign

 

You are the one, on whom I fear

You are the life, I mostly care

Everything with you, I hope I share

My love to you is unique, not just rare

 

 

© 2011 khalid


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Sweet poem ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very touching. It's beautiful and inspiring.

Posted 12 Years Ago


it`s amazing, great rhyme and deep feeling combined together! I love it and thank you! you inspire me...

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is so sweet poem.
It draws a smile on the face of the reader.
So nice Khaled

Posted 12 Years Ago


Maybe a little too eager to use words that rhyme .. it's not entirely necessary. Having said that however, you amaze me in your ability to use another language!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was such a lovely piece, Khalid...
Great work!! :)))

Posted 13 Years Ago


this was so sweet ..i loved this piece
well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww this is very sweet. Really like it, The rhyme scheme was very good and the words flowed beautifully together. Great job! I'll be waiting to read your next poem:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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khalid

October 6th City, Giza, Egypt



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