one more night

sometimes, we feel we need some more time chance to live what we lost years without feeling it!

 

 

If you want to leave, don’t leave me tonight

Be here with me, for just one more night

 

My heart needs more time to heal

So much love it wants you to feel

Be with me for just one more night

In which I can hug you so tight

then I hope that I might

Forget my fears and the fright

Of living without you

 for even one night

 

but if leaving is what you decide

 be with me, for just one more night

What can I do when I open my eyes

And find you are away from my sight

How can I stop my heart beats

When it cant feel you at my side

How can I be alive, without seeing your eyes

i dont want then to be here, i dont want my life 

 

But if leaving is what you gonna do

Don’t let me know, don’t say goodbye

I don’t want you, to see me when I cry

I don’t want you pity on me, when tears flood from my eye

Author's Note

im not a native english speaker, i feel english writing more than i have learnt it

Reviews

[Renée]

Sad beauty...

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

It's heart-wrenching. I want to cry now. It's wonderfully beautiful.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Honesty tears come from my eyes...Its specially sad for me...Its beautiful!

[Dove]

Wow. English isnt your first language adn you can still write like this, thats amazing. This poem is brilliantly written and it truly is beautiful.

[emmajoy]

Your poem is sadly beautiful, your feelings flow like tears.

In spite of English not being your first language, you've done brilliantly, the minor errors add to the air of your words. Learn English by reading and reading it, you'll be 'there' in no time and then, you'll write even more wonderful poetry.