I Miss Me

captured by her

 

 

 

I miss me

Since my eyes have fallen on you

And you have..captured me

My soul, has left me and around you, it has flown

My heart is beating calling your name

My mind sees only the image of you which it has drawn.

When you are away, i feel i am lost

Come back to my hug

I want to be..a small bug

So to you, i get always stuck

This is my only way,

To get myself back, to me

 

Reviews

[Roxii]

I love the way you put your emotions in your writing. It is very wonderful.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Dear bug ...dont get swatted:)

very innocent poem

[angelina neves]

a lovely love poem!

[Jeff]

An amazing, honest piece.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A touching and consistent piece that speaks to all of us, well done, good read.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You have a lovely way of gifting your heart... inside the giftbox is your soul, displayed gently...a tender and tangible heart, which I find to be ever so sweet... Wonderful write, my friend!~xo~:)

[Frieda P]

Oh when love is intoxicating it takes over our entire reality. A little glimpse into your soul finally, love this one khalid.

[patricia]

you touch on a complicated subject here. How people lose themselves in others, and highlight indirectly the difference between real love and the co-dependent type of relating. Interesting poem. Enjoyed.

[Cara]

awwwww, amazing
something happend today with me, this song just fits my friend, she is like this when she sees him like totally

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Love make us want to be near always. These are the good days. I like the good description and desire to be a bug holding on. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote