Lucky Bird

i wish i were a bird having wings to fly..

 

 

 

I wish I were a bird,

And just out of your window,

I would build my nest.

 

So every morning

As soon as you wake up,

You are the first,

To hear me sing.

 

And when you go out,

From a place to another,

I fly over your head

To wish you the best.

Then,  when it is time,

For the sun to set

And you are back to your bed

Please, just keep the window, unlocked

So while I am in my nest

I can lift my head

To watch you in your dreamy bed

And I promise,

I will never disturb

But  if that is what you once have felt,

Just move your head down then up,

And you will never..see me around.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dalia]

A very beautiful description of how you feel, The metaphors you used are lovely and close to heart, rhyming was good too
well done :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes we have to disturb to find love...we have to sing to that person, fly close let her know we are around...

she can either respond or go back to sleep. her choice.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very lovely piece of writing.

i hear the song outside my window as i read this.

jacob

[khalid]

thank you for reading and reviewing

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is a sweet and gentle write. An Angelic bird to watch over a loved one. I felt the spirit of this to be protective, loving, and nurturing. Great write Khalid!!

[khalid]

thank you for the angelic review

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. To be a free bird and desire to make someone happy. It would be a good thing. I like the description and the desire of your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote