Lucky Bird

i wish i were a bird having wings to fly..

 

 

 

I wish I were a bird,

And just out of your window,

I would build my nest.

 

So every morning

As soon as you wake up,

You are the first,

To hear me sing.

 

And when you go out,

From a place to another,

I fly over your head

To wish you the best.

Then,  when it is time,

For the sun to set

And you are back to your bed

Please, just keep the window, unlocked

So while I am in my nest

I can lift my head

To watch you in your dreamy bed

And I promise,

I will never disturb

But  if that is what you once have felt,

Just move your head down then up,

And you will never..see me around.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Karen Elizabeth miller]

A wonderful representation of true love I'm horrible at giving reviews though I hope it helps

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lovely poem, sweet and beautiful. It could be a great love the person can give in his/her behalf. Thanks for sharing.

[Brave girl]

very beautiful peom,well expressed...the tittle is amazing :)

[Holly Mason]

what a wish...
the start of this just kept me reading
title got me to read it...
thank you much for sharing

[khalid]

oh! Holly Mason reads for me and reviews? and moreover she says she liked what she has read? lol..it was a wish for me that you do! thank you really..i feel so much proud now..

[Tierra Starr]

I absolutely love the beginning of this! :) That's so sweet. "So every morning, As soon as you wake up, You are the first, To hear me sing." It's beautiful.

[khalid]

thank you..

[PP]

I wish I were a bird now Khalid! lol..beautiful piece :)

[khalid]

umm me too..

[PP]

haha :)

[Angel of Heart's]

The art of crafting a beautiful poem is being able to put your reader inside of your words, so that they feel they are there, and that is exactly what you have done.....your imagery is stunning, and the vision it embraces is timeless....Bravo.....

[khalid]

thank you. your review is highly appreciated

[MOON]

Free as a bird singing the song of love , delicate write , lovely sentiments Khalid .

[dunnia]

wow this is beautiful i love the scenery....such a happy yet lonely feeling i get while reading this..nice work