Save Our Planet

people are destroying nature, till when?

 

 

 

To this crazy world, I don’t feel I belong

With all its noise, pollution and crowdedness

Cars, planes, rockets, factories, bombs, weapons

Wars, hatred, cheating, dishonesty and selfishness

Where's love? Where's peace? Where's mutual respect?

Bad singers, loud music, machines' sound

Bad words are always heard

Why  can I no longer  hear the birds sing?

Why is everything artificial? Does nature still exist?

How can I have a nap, without setting my alarm clock?

How can i pass a day, without hearing my mobile ring?

I miss the taste of nature, I miss the stars' brightness

Dirty water, dirty air, dirty land

Dirty morals, dirty talks, dirty deeds

Smoking, drugs, poverty,  homeless kids

Oh, man! You are responsible for all of this

All creatures hate you, don’t you feel it?

Deforestation, pollution, global warmth

Are you going to do more ?what's next?

 

 

  

 

Author's Note

i love nature but where is it?

Reviews

[Najam Us Saher]

Eaxctly....I love when people show care and concern for nature. Loved this poem. True and to the point. Well done.

[Dove]

Yes! Yes! That was such an amazing poem, its was perfect. I really enjoyed this poem. Beautiful job!

[The dark story]

indeed man has been selfish...sorely selfish!! and just because of feeding our greed, our wants, our infinite needs, we just go on eradicating the very soul of nature. it;s too pathetic that we find ourselves more comfortable in this artificial world rather than in the sublime world of nature.

"All creatures hate you, don’t you feel it?"...so thought provoking...i hope more and more people read this work of yours to realise the result of their action! loved this work!! thanks for sharing it with us!!

[khalid]

thank you so much..i appreciate every word you have typed..

[The dark story]

thanks and welcome!

[Prritiy]

Why can I no longer hear the birds sing?
genuine cause for worry, but still its not hard to find nature in the flower that blossoms in your garden.. humanity is also visible and is not so rare.....

liked your creation.

[khalid]

thank you, beauty is in the eye of beholder..

[Prritiy]

yes, true and i manage to find something to smile even when stuck up in a traffic jam by looking at sky, trees or flying bird, at times a child :)

[khalid]

life is sweet if we ourselves try to be sweet..

[Prritiy]

:)

[Dalia]

This poem is very expressive, it tells how I and lots of people feel these days, you are right, I won't say you are pessimistic, but nature is there, and beauty is inside us if not around , I believe so :)
However I loved your style of writing.

[khalid]

thank you. im really honored you liked it

[Dalia]

you are most welcomed

[Pax]

mother nature is breathless my friend... and i sense that in your poem...
she almost lost all her children... hope is just a door step away if only man realized that...

great poem my friend..

[Bidu Ibrahim]

You are not the only one man! I miss it too.. Nice poem, yet again.. Good work Khaled.

[Kajal Gulabani]

"The need of the hour" is a perfect description for this poem. We must offer gratitude to nature for keeping us immune. "We can, We will".....

[de_maruf]

fine

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~ ah... i cannot thank you enough for expressing this anguish... sadly, this is the era of the fake and false... the unethical and the inhuman... ~ human beings are too obsessed with themselves to even begin to reflect... let alone transform... however, we can lead by example... by asking the right questions... by increasing awareness... as you have done in this extremely thought-provoking piece of writing... excellent work, dear khalid...

[khalid]

thank you. it is really appreciated

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~ you're very welcome...