Heart Deeds

hearts almost mislead us

 

 

 

Oh my silly heart

Why  are you  beating that  fast?

Haven’t you been there at my last

Meeting with her?

I feel  pity  on  you

But what am I supposed to do?

She said that she had to go

Leaving you alone here....

Please stop that nonsense

Does it make any sense,

To feel her... since

She never felt you?

You wrongly thought you could be a brave hero

Conquering hearts, whatever the race.

thinking you hear her heart calls

and your blood runs in her veins

But you got smashed, on her walls

 

Reviews

[Starfruitanimal]

full of emotion, well done

[patricia]

A telling tale of unreciprocated love and its pain. Well penned.

[Coyote Poetry]

Love is always a wild journey. Sometime lead to bad places and anger. The poem was honest and direct. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"The heart wants what the heart wants"...we try to own it, but we can't.

"Conquering hearts, whatever the race.
thinking you hear her heart calls"~ This rings true...a Lovely write!

[†Tracey†]

Very good poem then that last line seals the deal with a power punch of emotion.. well done..xo

[Sami Khalil]

your blood runs
in her veins.
That is a poetic write.