Heart Deeds

hearts almost mislead us

 

 

 

Oh my silly heart

Why  are you  beating that  fast?

Haven’t you been there at my last

Meeting with her?

I feel  pity  on  you

But what am I supposed to do?

She said that she had to go

Leaving you alone here....

Please stop that nonsense

Does it make any sense,

To feel her... since

She never felt you?

You wrongly thought you could be a brave hero

Conquering hearts, whatever the race.

thinking you hear her heart calls

and your blood runs in her veins

But you got smashed, on her walls

 

Reviews

[Angel of Heart's]

Such a myriad of emotions your words cultivated in me...this jewel touches deep and holds on.....You have a rare and awesome poetic voice....Exhale my friend.....broken dreams lead us to the amazing ones our souls have always known .....

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~ a beautiful piece of poetry that's powerful too... the heart is so strange... and yet so amazing too... it truly loves beyond man-made boundaries... it doesn't care for race or religion... and when it breaks, it does hurt more than a real injury... ~ superbly written, dear khalid...

[khalid]

thank you for your nice sweet review. it is really appreciated

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~ you're very welcome...

[Frieda P]

Ahh, that twist of fate can be so unforgiving sometimes. Beautiful sentiments, very well written.

[khalid]

And that is how love goes.... sometimes more cruel than it suppose to go....
Excellent one !

E.L.

[khalid]

again, it has been so long, thank you so much

Always a pleasure Khalid :)

[khalid]

it is really my own pleasure when i see a review from someone sincere like you..

:) smiles across the miles!

[MOON]

Love is full of twist and turns.poignant good write.

[de_maruf]

fine

[Mockingbird]

a fool admitting he's a fool. full of honesty. lovely poem.

[Sky]

Heartachingly good! This is full of longing. Well written.

[Renée]

Beautiful.. I love the the way you ask your heart questions.. and the last question " since she never felt you? Could have been a statement..but you put it as a question to her heart...it is very tender
The last sentence is a strong visual.. Lovely work Khalid !

[luviva]

wow.. the matter of hearts, i love it beautifully conveyed and full of emotion