Lovely Couple

we should learn love from other creatures

 

 

It was time for the sun to set

Giving a chance for the tired creatures to rest

Mr. Bird was on his way home, happy with what today he has got

But he has to pass by the school tree to pick his little kid

Since Mrs Bird has taken today off-work

At last, Mr. Bird was back to his lovely nest

Finding his sweet wife has prepared some drink

And their most delicious food

At the dining table, they sat happily

The couple and the little kid

It was so peaceful that the kid, had been to bed

Giving space for the couple to enjoy such a romance moment

Mr, bird has spread his wings around the nest

And Mrs bird, put her head on his chest

In such a moment,

People light candles

But for us, bright stars are lit

They use chemical sprays to change the smell

But for us, each flower provide us with nice smell

So Mr. Bird, do you remember the memory of this night?

It is our first date, Aren't I right?

When I asked you, to be my bride

But i fell in you, long time before that

I let my heart fall in you, never could i control it

For me, did you know how much for it I had to wait?

I was watching you, flying than others, you were so fit

I decided to be only for you, even if i never get married

And when you came at such a night, to ask for it,

I felt as if my heart had really stopped

So for me, this night was really my life's sweetest

Hey! Don’t be loud! You may awaken the kid!

And under their blanket,

They went..

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

dont we learn from other creatures?

Reviews

[Angel of Heart's]

Like a tall glass of water, after the driest of seasons.....your words do more than satiate...as I sit here with tears....and this leaves me with such an ache...such a yearn...for more of the words that flow from your pen...

So very beautiful ...

[khalid]

you are really so sensitive and kind hearted..

[Jeff]

You've expressed a great story here. It has to be one of my favorites.

[khalid]

thanks Jeff

[Jeff]

You're welcome!

[pupeqt95]

I have to say that this is one of the first poems I have ever read and I really love it. I don't think there are enough nature poems out there. Again great poem:)

[khalid]

thank you so much for the nice review..

[pupeqt95]

Anytime:)

[†Tracey†]

Your words carry a beauty and is also full of life lessons... so much yet to know ..and so much we can learn still.

Thank you for sharing the beauty of your heart...x

[The dark story]

aww.that's a cute story.i liked this animal fable....and yes.there's a lot to learn from these cute and innocent creatures.my mother told me (long time ago).that humans learnt to bury the graves from a crow...iops.sorry that has nothing to do with it.it just popped in my mind !
but anyway.it's a simple and cute poem....

[khalid]

thank you so much, and yes, Adams son killed kis brother and then he didnt know what to do to the dead body, Allah sent the crow to show him how he is burying his brother..

[The dark story]

Allah always sent someone to show us the right direction through the work of the nature....

[de_maruf]

fine

[dunnia]

This is a beautiful poem...i love it and hopefully we can learn something from these innocent creatures

[khalid]

thank you..

[dunnia]

Your welcome

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. We can learn from the creatures of the earth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Renée]

Oh I adore nature & Birds are so delightful in so many ways ! This poem makes my heart flutter & smile as I read so gentle, tender & loving the visions you write of ..
I shall read this one again, Beautiful story Khalid ! ( :

[khalid]

i am not going to thank you for your sweetness because it will be boring thanking someone for a part of them..

[Renée]

This is such a sweet poem..I had to pause again.before I go about my day..