comparison

you can love more when you compare..

 

 

I like travelling

Because everywhere i go

I get to know

No other place

Can be compared to

My home land

 

I like meeting others

Because when i meet any

I feel happy

I know how much i am lucky

That i have....you

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Beautiful tribute to your homeland and kudos to your character. Nice read.

[luviva]

ohh this is such agreat poem, love the adventourous and its hospitable nature!!"i like meeting people"

[Catherine Schythe]

Nothing can ever compare our home land, yet we love to see other places, but there is no place like home, our own home. Nice poem Khalid.

[patricia]

Sometimes we have to leave something to appreciate what we had. Nice poem. Thanks.

[EMMIE]

awwww so sweet =D

[Mockingbird]

there really is 'no place like home'. when i go to my parents' land, as much as i am enjoying myself, i always get homesick. it's not the same.

[The dark story]

yeah.that's why we say:"home sweet home"..it's true .that though we like to travel but there's hardly any place where you can find that comfort as you find in your home...it's abeautiful piece of writing.and the last line is really sweet..nice work!!

[khalid]

thanks alot..

[†Tracey†]

This is simply beautiful. I love to travel and spread my wings but it's always so perfect when my feet land at my home..xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Sweet write!... To show appreciation for the homeland, the very core of ones existence is a beautiful thing. Lovely work!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and true poem. Home is where the heart is. A positive ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote