The Night

The Night

A Poem by khalid93

When I close my eyes to sleep; 
I remember everything I fear; 
The night is dark and silence is deep;
Lying down with all my tears;
Nothing only the worries to keep;
I plant the seed of happiness; 
But only sadness and sorrow to reap;

© 2015 khalid93


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frist of all i'm a beginner so any comment or correction will help me.
"i plant the seed of happiness" means that i try to be happy and forget misery, but i get struck by the reality after all . thank you for your review

Posted 9 Years Ago


The night is dark and silence is deep. Brings back childhood memories. Trying to sleep but not being able to for those simple reasons.
What did you mean by "i plant the seed of happiness;" ?

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on August 26, 2015
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khalid93
khalid93

Mosul, Iraq



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