doesnt have one yet

i just wrote this dont know what to think or what title

I'm here alone

I utter a groan

While your having fun

Under the sun

I don't want to live anymore

So I head to the door

Then to the bridge

Or maybe that very high ridge

Then you come around

Thinking i'm to be found

Dead

Or covered in red

I'm in tears

I've only myself to fear

You yell stop

As i'm about to drop

Off of that cliff

Into the very stiff

Waters below

I have no more woe

As I overcome my foe

Of not seeing you

And our child too

We go home satisfied 

And I am gratified

Author's Note

give me some comments please i think my poem sucks

Reviews

[Castonovia]

It doesn't suck... I actually liked it because it flows very well... I'm not one for writing this type of poetry, I fail miserably at it soooo keep writing;)