Treasure

To be found like lost treasure 

In your eyes so precious

And cherish all the blessings 

I see the concentration in your smile 

The way your laugh creeps up to give evince

To the brief thought of value to my existence 

Surpassing feeling to my heart miraculously covet 

To the marvellous sighting of you 

Astounding imagination of you 

Like uncommon shooting stars 

Which extraordinary wishes come true 

It's rare to find a being 

Who deserves the focus of a queen 

And seek dedication like a king 

I know if it's meant to be it will be 

Like the moon and sun

It's a dream 

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Once more you have injected such a romantic and adoring tone to this lovely heartfelt poem. There are some gramatical issues you might wish to review. After all writing needs crafting to make it better.