Resolve

Shes the best part of me 

The oxygen to my breath

The beat to my heart 

My universe resolve around her existence

The sun to my flower 

The waves to my ocean 

Shes the stars in my solar system 

The light which shines in the dark 

The movement of my body

Shes my career in which I devote myself 

The morning which i wake up to

The sunset i come home to

Shes the reason i smile like crazy 

The joy she brings to my thoughts 

The love she shows my soul 

I'm truly blessed to have you

Reviews

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love this honest and adoring romantic poem. Flows well in a well structured freeverse. A couple of typos though as below which I hope helps:

She's the best part of me
The oxygen to my breath
The beat to my heart

My universe revolves around her existence
The sun to my flower
The waves to my ocean

She's the stars in my solar system
The light which shines in the dark
The movement of my body

She's my career into which I devote myself
The morning which I wake up to
The sunset I come home to

She's the reason i smile like crazy
The joy she brings to my thoughts
The love she shows my soul
I'm truly blessed to have you