When I was I love with you

When I was I love with you

A Poem by Keysha Becerra
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Love Poem

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Oh, when I was I love with you,
  Then I was clean and brave,
And miles around the wonder grew
  How well did I behave.

And now the fancy passes by,
  And nothing will remain,
And miles around they'll say that I
  Am quite myself again.

© 2017 Keysha Becerra


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Keysha Becerra
I hope you can find this poem nice & clear, and you like it!

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despite the 1 or 2 grammar mistakes this a pretty good love poem from a 15 year old, you should write more of these!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Keysha Becerra

8 Years Ago

Thank you!! I will!

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Keysha Becerra
Keysha Becerra

San Juan, Puerto Rico



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I am Keysha Becerra from Puerto Rico, I'm a 15 year old writer, who dreams about getting in to the best high school of Puerto Rico and also write a book. I'm very social, I like to make friends. F.. more..

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