force of winter storming

this is one a part of a poetic graphic novel that i want to write.

Kunoichi are female ninja

Adept in the shadows

Smokey eye, the quiet storm

Beautiful and swift, of lithe body

Lethal with twin swords

Savior of Phat City

Avenger of exploited citizens

Shapeshifting hand maid, a sexy ninja

On edge like both swords

Born of shadows

Bellicose and strong bodied

Force of winter storming

Intense January and February storms

Descending upon the city

To claim evil bodies

Appearing as a ninja

Cloaked, stealthy and shadowy

Justice by the sword

A silent, deadly life of the sword

A looming storm

Casting twisted shadows

In the violent city

A ninja

Of sound mind and hard body

Paradigm of a woman's body

Surgical mistress of the sword

Folded paper, flying crane fighting style ninja

Calm before stormy

Sent to the corrupted city

Moving in shadow

Her beloved shadows

For the down and out anybody

In the grit of this city

The glint of two sworrds

Thunder storm

Of the sable haired ninja

Ninja shadows, fear of her storm

The toned bodied sword swinging protector of the big city

Author's Note

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