Dream

Waves. Dreams. Are really the same. Beautiful when they appear.. but when they crash, comes reality.

I dream of you,
Your soft voice,
echos under the sea.
YOur loving carress,
Lost in the waves.

I heard your voice today,
seemed as it was something long lost,
but long loved, longingly
lost at sea
the sea of unfamaliarity

The waves crashing at the shore,
Like the reality on my door,
Waking me up, from my dream
 

Author's Note

Dunno what Made me write this. Just check it out.

Reviews

[Imperfection]

Been quite a while since your last post. Welcome back !!

:-)
Nice theme.
Who doesn't like to dream? Our unfulfilled wishes are sometimes fulfilled in our dreams.

I like how you begin the poem with a dream/happiness and end it when the dreamer awakes to a reality of unhappiness.

In very few but meaningful lines, you've conveyed a lot. I like the use of phrases such as - echos under the sea,

the sea of unfamiliarity

and definitely, the last stanza.

Great work. Goes to my library straightaway.

[JENY]

Nice...really...
I like it....

[qaralynn]

good poem..like it

[Abby2M]

Hey man, the theme is nice. But please correct your spelling mistakes. Its a good one from me.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is really very nicely done and you know what it seems as if you have written it without making any extra efforts and that is why it flowed so effortlessly....The usage of imagery is just brilliant !
I loved the ending lines the most, they concluded the entire poem perfectly!

[Poeticpiers]

nicely written poeticprose good use of alliteration