A game of shadow and light

Which way will you go??

A mist of light,
Blurred reality,
But then,
All of a sudden

A burst of Light,
A burn of realization
The way known
On a way unknown

Walking on the path
As on a dark night
No Clue,
No Vision
Still walking on,

The goal set
On my mindset
One destination
Nothing else matters
Other than the guiding light

Imagery,
Painted on my memory,
A skillful Cover that kept me ignorant

But I dare,
Dare to share,
Share my thoughts, my beliefs,
And walk on,
On the path of my dreams.

Author's Note

I wrote this while going through some rough patches with my band. I dunno if this song will ever be composed or not.

Reviews

[poet2angels (lynda)]

I can hear this as a song...Awesome lyrics with emotion and colors flowing...
Love it...
Best wishes

Lynda

[Bhavya Kaushik]

As far as I can judge, it will make a better spoken word than a lyric, but again it depends upon the composer.
Its great though, in any of the case!
Great work.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

Wow i hope so that a great song... I loved it... Smetimes i feel like I'm walking in the dark with no one anywhere near me!!!

[Emily B]

Kevin,
I think it has lots of potential. One of the best poems I've read of yours, I think. Great job.

[Legion]

Not bad, but I think it needs more. Perhaps more direction. Not completely sure. Not too bad though. The music might hold it together.