Fuel is Low

Fuel is Low

A Poem by Kevin Andros
"

Race all you want, just keep an eye out for the fuel indicator!

"
I was driving down the hill so fast,
The speedometer was rising up the mark,
The car was flying above above the road,
Like the hovercraft was racing to the shore,

The speed was highest heading, eager touching,
With no sense of control

Fuel is low ... .... fuel is low

The turn was coming near towards us,
And the edge was enough to remove us from the track,
The night was deeply down into the dark,
Only moon that I could see in one sight,

The speed was highest heading, eager touching,
With no sense of control

Fuel is low ... .... fuel is low

The danger now was coming really closer,
And the shock absorber started not to work,
The Tyreware was causing really faster,
with a few drops of fuel inside the tank,

The speed was highest heading, eager touching,
With no sense of control

Fuel is low ... .... fuel is low


Watch our Performance live at the Carnival 2009:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WJrMt5jDRwI

© 2009 Kevin Andros


Author's Note

Kevin Andros
This song is written and composed by the star of our band, the lead guitarist and voalist, Valentine.

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This was great love!!!! LOVED THIS

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This is great, I'm sure that it will make a great song!
"The night was deeply down into the dark,
Only moon that I could see in one sight, " - I loved these lines the most, imparting that feel of darkness brilliantly in the entire lyrics.

Great work, keep writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow that was great.... very nice!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its aight.
I dont think it flowed well, but thats just my
personal opinion. And in the first stanza, you wrote
"above above". I didn't know if that was intentional or not.
Anyhow, good job with this one.

BeegE

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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