A Dark side of the Light

A depressed person arguing with his own soul

Am I a stupid person? Am I?

Why the hell are you asking that?

Coz everyone says that I’m the stupidest person ever being born on the earth.

Why the hell do you give a damn about other’s persons’ opinion about you man!?

I don’t know.

What do you think?

I think I’m not stupid.

Then why the hell you give a damn about the people on the earth? Just tell them to f**k off. You are awsome. We are awsome. Together, we can do anything. Right dude?

Maybe.

What the hell is this maybe?

Well, maybe you are right.

Maybe I’m right? Oh hell. You just have to be confident about yourself man!

How can I feel confident about myself if no one is on my side? I have no friends, if you haven’t noticed. I was all alone this long 25 damn years man! Tell me mate, how can I feel confident!?

Am I not your friend?

Of course you are but…

Then how can you say that you don’t have any friends.

I only meant….

Like I said, quit worrying or caring about the outside world man. You are me, I am you and together, we can do anything. We can achieve anything.

But how can I focus on our goal if no one in this world is with me? I mean that we have to work on this world, then if no one in this world is with me, then how shall we succeed?

Listen carefully and closely. You know that I’m with you.

Yes... but…

Stop. Don’t interrupt. I’m with you and God is with you. Right?

Certainly but…

Sssh! Now, God is with you and all the persons in this world has faith in God. Right?

Yes… but..

Right. Now if everyone on this planet is with God and God is with you, who can stop us?

Yes. You are right. Now I am getting my smile back.

Glad to see you smiling. You look great when smiling. So, I will say this to you; don’t ever loose heart, keep up your good work of helping everyone who needs your help, continue to work on your goal and if ever you get disheartened, you will always find me at your side. You will always find me at your side, at your front, having your back, all around you. You must have seen darkness, you also must have seen the darkness getting chased away by a single beam of light. But always bear in mind that the beam of light also has a dark side. We have to overcome that dark side. We are the light. And always be ‘lit’.

Thank you for your enormos support and faith that you have on me. But… who are you?

Me? Me. I am me. I am you.

Author's Note

Please bear in mind that I came up with this thing in about 3 minutes. Plus, I was really pissed off about something and my mind was howling with rage. So Please be kind. ;-)

Reviews

[Imperfection]

The best way to settle the mind is to get rid of the rage through writing. Looks like you managed to do exactly that in this piece. And I think you must have done an excellent job of it because it doesn't appear to have been written when you were not in your best mood. This seems like a well-thought out piece. But then, sometimes our best creations are born when we are going through our worst days.

Very well done.

I stumbled in a few places. This piece would read much better if you fixed 'em.
Coz everyone says that I'm the stupidest person ever being born on the earth = ...ever born...

Sssh! Now, God is with you and all the persons in this world has faith in God. Right? = ...and everyone has faith in ...

enormos = enormous

[Nya]

Sometimes we write some of our best work in a few minutes to blow off steam. I love this...such a great confidence builder. And it's true that ultimately we have to be our own best friend in life....great work.

[lAcEy_LoO's Poems Site]

true true... i've been dealing with depression I know what it like to fight with myself!!! But I like this one 2...

[Candle in the wind]

Thats what ultimately works I guess when you can pep yourself up irrespective of what the world says but then there isn't enough spirit to do that always

[Lauren Xena Campbell]

What a great confidence builder. And a delightful read. I very much enjoyed this! It was not only amusing but the moral of it shines though clearly and the does the indication of the two voices. Great write!

[Bhavya Kaushik]

this is a very complex piece I should say!!
and I can clearly see how you've outbursted your emotions in it...
it is a kind of depressing piece...but....also the way you've argued it throughout the piece increases the spontaneity and readability of the piece..
overall..its a great read
keep writing..

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

Well, since I have to be kind, I won't go into detail of the fact that I kindof liked it.
I was going to say that I liked it a lot and it was raw in form and that everyone has that same sort of dialog in there head at one time or another whether they want to admit it or not.
But since I have to be kind, I'll just say 'it was great' and leave it at that.
Love All,
Mejasha