Hell HouseA Story by Kevin GutierrezShould have posted this during Halloween but oh well! Blood oozed
from all the cracks and wrinkles of the old wooden house. Sandy and I were
already scared enough when, from a distance, I heard the most grueling, evil
laugh I had ever heard. I turned to Sandy and tears began to stream down her
face. I took her hand and said, “We’re going to make it out of here no matter
what it takes.” I tugged on her hand to follow me down the hallway. The blood
was beginning to flood the hallway, already devouring our ankles and quickly
creeping up to our knees. I was franticly looking for a way out. The laughing
that, at first, sounded like it was coming from behind us now seemed to be
coming from every direction. I slammed through the door that was at the end of
the hallway and what greeted us was another empty old room. The river of blood
quickly rushed passed our ankles and began to fill this room too. I was really
beginning to lose faith in what I had told Sandy. She squeezed my hand and I
looked back at her. Her eyes were puffy and red from crying yet she was wide
eyed from being so scared. She was giving me a look that made me think of a
small lost puppy lost in the middle of New York. I looked to the west of us and
saw another old rotten door, this one with a doorknob. “We are getting out of
this,” I told myself. Pulling Sandy along with me, I walked over to the door
and with my right leg broke it down. The
vibrating in my ear made me jump from my bed to my carpet floor. I slowly
pulled myself up and looked at the clock I had sitting on the nightstand posted
next to my bed. 6:30 am it said. “Great,” I
thought. “Time for school.” I grabbed my phone from under my pillow and made
sure that I turned it off and not on snooze so that it didn’t decide to freak
me out by ringing again. I didn’t make my bed (I usually do, as surprising as
that might sound) and walked down stairs to have some breakfast. My younger
brother, Jimmy, was already at the table with a plate of half-eaten pancakes
laid in front of him. He was mid chew when I sat down. “Here you
go Matt.” My mom set down a plate of freshly made pancakes with some cut
strawberries on the side. “You know,”
I commented, “I’m about to miss these mornings when I head off to college.” My
mom frowned and said, “Don’t even talk about that. Makes me sad just thinking
about that.” My brother
started to giggle and I turned to him. “What are you laughing at?” He contained
himself enough to say, “Your hair! It’s ridiculous!” I only had to float my
hand over my head for me to realize what he was talking about. I could feel my
hair sticking out in every direction possible. My hair wasn’t that long, but it
was long enough to make me look like a clown when I woke up with a bed head. “Don’t
bother him Jimmy. Your hair isn’t looking that much better.” I made a sizzling
noise and placed my finger on my brother’s forearm. “Burned,” I
whispered. My mom and I started to laugh while my brother’s cheeks began to
flush. “Now come
on you guys,” My mom cut in. “Finish up. School starts soon.” The rest of
my morning went by relatively quick with me finishing my meal, taking a quick
shower, and getting my backpack ready to go to school. I walked downstairs,
gave my mom a quick kiss on the cheek, and walked out with my bike which I got
from my backyard. Now, we did
have one extra car which was basically used between my brother and I but I usually
let my brother drive it to school and call it his own since I had every
intention on getting a new car when I graduated. My brother
quickly drove away while I mounted my bike and made my way down the
neighborhood street towards the bike path that branched out towards the end that
led straight towards my high school. I almost began to slow my pace just so I
would avoid the rush of kids trying to get to their classes but I began to get
close to the second to last house on my street, the house that the bike path
ran by, and everything seemed to slow down in a very unnerving manner. I hadn’t
known about this house’s history until my seventh grade math teacher told me
about it when I decided to stay in one lunch to get some help on some math
homework that I was having trouble with. It was an old wooden house to begin
with, so that right there already set the mood for the creepiness it exemplified.
I remember Ms. Norwood telling me about the couple that used to live there and
what had happened to them. “They
seemed to be a happy couple,” Ms. Norwood explained. “Nothing seemed out of the
ordinary. They were just living out the rest of their life in that old house,
or so the rumors go.” She shifted in her seat and cleared her throat as she put
her pencil down. “Their
names were Marry Dean and Jack Dean. The house that they lived in was already
an old house by the 80’s, which is when all of this happened. It wasn’t until
one Saturday morning that the house got so much attention. You see, Jack would
always go on a run every night, but one Friday night, something happened. He
never returned. His wife alerted the police and they searched all night until
Saturday morning, when they found his body in a small ravine about ten miles
from his house. The story blew up and poor Marry couldn’t get time for her self
to mourn the loss of her husband.” “But how
did he die?” I asked. “Well they ended up concluding that it was
suicide, but I never believed it. Everyone in the community didn’t believe it.
And it only made it worse when they found Marry on the floor one afternoon dead
as well. They covered that up as a heart attack which seemed more believable
but still. Something wasn’t right about their deaths. She had died while mixing
some flour, probably about to make some snickerdoodles. Those were her favorite
and she was very good at making them to no one’s surprise. There were rumors
that she had gotten stabbed. The one rumor I do believe"” She looked around us
to make sure no one was listening and whispered, “I think there was already
something evil in that house. An evil spirit that caused their deaths.” I
probably had a weird look on my face because her face softened and she
chuckled. “Well,
they’re only rumors right? Anyways, we have to get this math done. That story
took more time than I thought it would.” She had
told me that years ago yet the idea that something evil had killed a happy old
couple made me shiver every time I biked past the house. My bike ran over a
fallen branch and the sharp crack sent
an electrical current through my whole body and I peddled away from that creepy
old house as fast as I possible could. Needless to
say I got to Wilson High School relatively quick after that immediate
adrenaline rush. Unfortunately for me, I ran straight into the rush of freshman
that I wanted to avoid. Being a sophomore now, I knew better than to be caught in this rush of confusion. It also came quick to my attention that I had forgotten
that it was Halloween which, to be quite honest, didn’t surprise me. I hadn’t
truly done anything for Halloween since probably the sixth grade. My first
two classes were my day killers. First was Biology which always put me in a
more curious mood just because the topics we talked about like cell biology,
for example, made me want to become a scientist except for the fact that the
class was just a little too early for me to really get my full attention and
most of the time made me sleepier than I already was walking into the class. And
then came History class. This class was already a subject I could care less
about, while adding the fact that I had the most boring teacher to ever teach
American history, made for a pretty horrible experience. When class
finally ended, I sped out of there as fast as I could and walked over to my
locker which was on the second floor in the math hallway. As I was putting my
biology binder away, a finger tapped me on the shoulder. I turned around to
find a snarling, ugly looking wolf/human hybrid staring me straight in the
face. I yelped and backed up which led me to slam my head on the lockers. “You
couldn’t have reacted any better than that!” I could recognize that voice from
a mile away. I looked up to see the dirty wolf hand grab its own face and peel
it off, leaving me face to face with my girlfriend, Sandy Mclean. “Nice to
see you too,” I muttered as I rubbed the back of my head. She leaned into me
and kissed me on the lips. “It seems like you forgot that it’s Halloween
today.” “I haven’t
really ‘done’ Halloween in a couple of years now.” She rolled her eyes and
frowned. “You don’t
have to be mister tough guy all the time you know,” She remarked. “You can have
a little fun every once in a while.” I sighed. Sandy was a short girl, around
five foot three inches. I was only five inches taller than her. She had deep
blue eyes and long light brown hair. It had a natural wavy pattern that started
below her shoulders. She was one of the more athletic girls in the school.
Maybe being the star soccer player helped her gain the reputation. “It’s not
about being tough!” I sniffed and continued. “I think the correct reference you
were looking for is that I don’t have to be so lazy all the time.” She gave me
a friendly shove. “Okay,
whatever. I was just going to ask you to come with me to go trick-or-treating
tonight!” “Do I have
to?” “Well,” She
smiled, “since you make it sound like you don’t have a choice, yes, you have to
come with me.” I face palmed myself and laughed. “Alright, I guess I’ll come. I’ll just meet you at
your house later tonight?” “Yup! Get
there around nine o’clock!” She kissed me again as the bell rang for us to
continue our school day. “I’ll text
you too,” She yelled over the sudden stampede of people rushing to get to
class. “Just in case you ‘forget’! So don’t even think about using that
excuse!” I shook my head smiling, closed my locker, and began walking to my
Algebra class. The rest of
the day went by relatively fast and before I knew it I was grabbing the grim
reapers weapon of choice, my five-foot-long plastic scythe. “What time
do you think you’ll be back?” My mom yelled from the kitchen as I walked passed
her to get to the front door. “Not
exactly sure! Text me if you go to sleep before I get back though.” And with
that, I opened the door and began walking up my street to Sandy’s house. She
had texted me thirty minutes earlier just to make sure I didn’t try to find a
way out. It was
about a five minute walk from my house since she lived only two blocks away. Once
I got to the door, I knocked three times and waited. . . and kept waiting. I looked
up to the windows on the second floor and none of the lights were on, making
the house blend in with the darkness that enveloped the sky. I pulled
out my phone to see if she had texted me that they had gone up ahead without me
but nothing. I looked back at the door and began to lose myself in the wavy
pattern that was carved into its wooden frame when, all of a sudden, two hands
grabbed me from the waist and yelled, “Boo!” I sprung
from the person’s grasp and slammed my head into the door, making the whole
house shake. I heard a couple of girls and guys laughing in the background and
I knew immediately who it was. I turned around to find a pirate, a cat, a prisoner,
and a captain that looked like he had just made the trek from whatever was left
of the Titanic to here. It only took me a second to realize that the pirate was
Sandy only because her blue eyes seemed to sparkle in the bright moonlight. The
cat was one of Sandy’s best friends, Cassie. She had dark brown eyes and long
brunette colored hair with red highlights blended in. She was lean and one of the tallest girls in our grade
standing at six foot one inches. That height definitely helped her when she
took the basketball court as she was already one of the top recruits in the
state. The prisoner was a guy named James. His blond hair was messy and pats of black makeup over his forehead and cheeks made it seem like he had just escaped maximum security. I only knew him because we had a
couple of classes together. He played on the JV basketball team, but every
day, biking back from school, I always saw him putting in work on the blacktop
courts. I knew he was going to be someone in the sport eventually and he was
already as tall as Cassie, so who knew how tall he would end up being by the
time we all graduated. The last one in the group was
Andres, the half dead captain. He undoubtedly had the best costume out of any
of us, making us all look like rookies. He was on the varsity basketball team,
but basketball was never his main priority. He was only on the team because his
dad forced him to join. He had a freak natural ability to shoot the ball.
Everyone knew he could be something great but instead of giving it everything
he had, he would just mess around and not really care about the team. The one
thing that no one really knew though was how much Andres helped James. They
were best friends so that always helped. Sandy came up to me and put her
hands on my waist. “Now that was the
best reaction you could have given.” I was glad I had my mask on or else she
would have seen all the blood rushing to my face from the anger that was
boiling up. “I hope you’re happy,” I grumbled. “I’m happy you’re here if that’s
what you’re asking.” She turned around and addressed everyone. “Alright, so
what exactly do you guy want to do?” “Well,” James started as he began
to pull out a carton of eggs, “I was thinking we have a little bit of
adrenaline run through us and mess with some middle schoolers.” Cassie had her eyebrow arched and
said, “I think―” “I think that’s a great idea!” I
cut in. All the guys high fived each other while the girls looked at each other
as if they were saying, “They want to mess with middle schoolers but they
aren’t acting much older than them.” James gave Andres and I a couple of eggs.
He walked over to the girls to give them some but they put their hands up. “You have fun doing that,” Cassie
said. “We’re just going to watch.” “More for me.” We all began to walk
down the street, passed my house and slowly but surely made our way to the one
house that I did not want to have any encounter with tonight. James stopped in front of the
house's old rotten gates and my heart felt like it stopped with him. A small
breeze ran through the house and it sounded like every part of it started talking all at once. Even the old pine tree perched on the front lawn
creaked with the slightest amount of wind. “I dare you to walk in the house
and stay inside for at least ten minutes.” I didn’t realize he was talking to
me until I looked up and found James' glowing green eyes staring right at me. “You’re joking right? You have
heard the story to that place right?” He only laughed and patted me on the
back. “I’m well aware of the history to this place, which is exactly why I’m
daring you.” I hesitated and was about to tell
him off when Sandy came over to me and grabbed my arm. “Oh he’ll go in there,
but I’m going in there with him, for twenty minutes.” I immediately took off my
mask and was about to blurt out the absurdity of her idea but then I let myself
hear the rest of her little deal she was conjuring. “We’ll do it, but we all have to go
to dinner twice next week and you have to pay for our meals both times.” “Why twice,” Andres asked. “Twice,” Sandy continued, a smirk
on her face, “because the both of us are going to go in there, and I changed the time from ten minutes
to twenty minutes, so I think it’s only fair. You can split how you pay us
between each other.” They all looked at each other and James responded, “Fine.
But I’ll tell you when twenty minutes are up.” Sandy pulled me with her and we
walked up to the little old fence that stood in the way of us and the godforsaken
house. “Are you sure this is a good idea?”
I mumbled. “Doesn’t two free dinners sound
like a good idea?” “Well let’s hope I walk out of this
place with my sanity so I can even enjoy those dinners.” She rolled her eyes
and proceeded to push the gate open and we began to make our way through the
front lawn. Another gust of wind hit the house
and it sounded like the house was howling, “Noooooooo,”
to us. I could feel all the hairs on my body stand up and almost decided that
the dinners weren’t even worth it when Andres yelled from the street, “Come on
already and get into the house! I’m going to die of old age the way you two are
walking!” “Let’s just hurry up and get into
the house,” I said as I ushered Sandy forward. I could see that she was
already as scared as I was, but it was her idea, so instead of trying to
convince her that it wasn’t worth it, I tugged her arm and continued. The front door was very old and
rotten to the core. There was an old wind up doorbell attached to the center of
the door. Rust lingered in every corner. There wasn’t even a
doorknob to grab onto so I pushed the door opened and we walked in. “It’s pretty dark in here,” Sandy
commented. I shook my head. “I can hardly make
anything out.” I could only see the outlines of stairs that went up to the
second floor and a little night stand laying on the hallway wall that led to
what I would assume was the kitchen. BAM. I wrapped Sandy in my arms and
turned around to find the door had slammed shut. “Okay,” I said, trying to keep
my breathing calm and steady. “Just a stupid door.” I knew the door couldn’t
lock because it didn’t have a doorknob but claustrophobia wrapped my head with
being trapped and I walked over to pull open the door from the hole and what do you know. It
wouldn’t open. “That’s not funny,” Sandy said
nervously. “I swear I’m pulling!” To make it
clear I wasn’t joking, I took a couple of steps back and ran into the door
shoulder first, only for the house to moan from the hit and dust trickle down on
top of us. “This is not happening right now.” Sandy slammed her first on the door but
with no avail. “Let’s just relax for a second.” I
pulled out my phone but to my surprise I didn’t get any signal in the house. “Well not to make things worse, but
I don’t get a signal in here.” Sandy turned to me with panic in
her eyes. “That just made things a lot worse.” “All of them should still be out
there right?” I walked back to the door and bent down to look through where the
doorknob should have been and sprung backwards knocking Sandy over. “What the heck! What was that for.”
My voice felt caught in my throat. The most evil, bloodshot looking eye was
what greeted me instead of what should have been the front yard. “What did you see?” Sandy began to
walk to take a look for herself but I grabbed her arm and pulled her back, my
grip fairly tight. “I’m doing you a favor. Don’t look
through there.” Through all this panic I hadn’t realized that I still had my
plastic scythe in my left hand. “At least we have some sort of
protection, right?” Sandy looked anything but amused with my attempt at a joke.
“Okay we just―” Something wet and
warm began to run down my back. I reached back and touched it. Sticky is what
it felt like. “What is it?” Sandy asked. “Use your phone light and shine it
on my hand.” She reached for her phone and turned on the light. When my eyes
adjusted to the brightness, I stopped breathing. Blood covered my entire hand. “What the hell!” Sandy shrieked. “I’m not bleeding though!” I looked
up to the ceiling and gasped. The light shining from Sandy’s phone was just
strong enough for me to see the blood forming all around us. Blood oozed from all the cracks and
wrinkles of the old wooden house. Sandy and I were already scared enough when,
from a distance, I heard the most grueling, evil laugh I had ever heard. I
turned to Sandy and tears began to stream down her face. I took her hand and
said, “We’re going to make it out of here no matter what it takes.” I tugged on
her hand to follow me down the hallway. The blood was beginning to flood the
hallway, already devouring our ankles and quickly creeping up to our knees. I
was franticly looking for a way out. The laughing that, at first, sounded like
it was coming from behind us now seemed to be coming from every direction. I
slammed through the door that was at the end of the hallway and what greeted us
was another empty old room. The river of blood quickly rushed passed our ankles
and began to fill this room too. I was really beginning to lose faith in what I
had told Sandy. She squeezed my hand and I looked back at her. Her eyes were
puffy and red from crying yet she was wide eyed from being so scared. She was
giving me a look that made me think of a small puppy lost in the middle of New
York. I looked to the west of us and saw another old rotten door, this one with
a doorknob. “We are getting out of this,” I told myself. Pulling Sandy along
with me, I walked over to the door and with my right leg broke it down. I saw our way out. At the very end
of the room was a small rectangular window, just big enough for Sandy and I to
squeeze through. We ran to the window and I made the mistake of looking back.
Instead of the blood river slowly filling this room as well, an old man and old
woman stood in front of the door that we just entered through. I looked back
and found Sandy staring at them as well. “Come on,” I said, ushering Sandy
behind me. “We need to get this window open." I was so scared that I didn’t even think of looking for a lever to open the window and instead just used my elbow to
smash the glass. Thank god the house was old and the windows not as sturdy as
they once were as the glass shattered much easier than I thought it would. I
turned back around and found the couple still staring at us but they now were
crying tears of blood. I grabbed Sandy by the waist and
hauled her through the window, also throwing my scythe through the window with
her. I grabbed the window sill with my hands, not caring that the shattered glass was cutting through both palms of my hand, and pulled myself up. Sandy offered
me her hand and before I could grasp it, a hand wrapped around my ankle and began
to pull me back into the house. Sandy jumped for me and was able to grab my
right arm. I looked back and found the old man
holding my right ankle with the old woman holding my left ankle. “You have talked to her,” The old
woman hissed at me. “The unforgivable. Because of that, you must have a touch
of our pain.” “I’ve talked to who?!” I yelled back. “The woman that did this to us.
That ruined our lives. She stole from us. The teacher telling the wrong story about us.” The old
man’s anger was beginning to give way to something like . . . sadness? A name popped into my head. “Ms.
Norwood?” Their grip on my ankles tightened and I yelped from the pain. “That’s the one! You’re going to
give her a little present from us!” My body was slowly falling back into the
house. As my arm was slipping through Sandy’s blood covered hand, the old man
pulled out a switch blade and tapped it on my ankle. “I hope this is a reminder for her
and for you to never return here again.” I squeezed my eyes shut, ready for him
to start sawing my ankle off, but Sandy’s yell made me open my eyes and I found
her jabbing the old couple with my scythe. “Help me!” She yelled. The
distraction was just enough for me to kick and wiggle my out of their grasp. I
got up, grabbed the scythe from Sandy, and threw the plastic weapon as hard as
I could into the couple. I pushed Sandy in front of me and we ran around the
house and out the small little gate into the street. Everybody was still
standing on the street, talking to each other, and our heavy breathing caught
their attention. “It’s not twenty minutes yet!”
Andres yelled. Bewildered, I responded, “Are you
guys blind? Look at us! We’re covered in―” I stopped myself when I looked over
at Sandy and back at myself. There wasn’t a single scratch on either of us
and not a trace of blood. The palms of my hands weren’t cut up as if what I had
just gone through never happened. “What’s wrong with you guys?”
Cassie asked. “Nothing,” Sandy responded. Her
breaths were shaky. She grabbed my hand and said, “We’re just going to go back
to my place. We don’t feel good.” We turned around and began to walk back when
James shouted at us, “What’s the matter? You don’t want to play anymore? Was
the truth to much for you to handle? That you’ve interacted with a cold blooded murder that stole our fortune? Our own daughter!” I felt like my veins went icy cold as I turned around to find all the
three of them lined up, looking back at us with blood dripping out of their
mouths, the whites in their eyes gone and replaced with color of blood. “We didn’t escape,” Sandy murmured,
trying hard not to cry. James mouth opened but his voice
was not the one that spoke. “You will never escape. No one escapes.” The voice was right. We hadn’t
escaped. I realized now that we were trapped in the house’s nightmare.
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Added on March 17, 2016 Last Updated on September 2, 2016 AuthorKevin GutierrezNovato, CAAboutI'm from Corte Madera, California. Love to write all types of things from simple one page random scenes of a dream I have to short stories that I might create out of the blue. I have one story that I .. more..Writing
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