Where's MY Cinderella Story?

Where's MY Cinderella Story?

A Poem by kerri

As the days pass by,

Each feeling in my body feels... broken

But as these old feelings disapear,

New ones are created..

Not ones of enjoyment.. nor sadness..

Just wasted feelings..

No,

You dont know what goes on in my mind..

How I really feel..

But i TRY..

But then again..

Iknow its useless..

This black abyss that I always stare into...

YOU can't see it but..

It SCARES me..

because I know..

Its never ending..

I dont have a Cinderella story..

There is no prince in shining armor coming to rescue me from my tower,

I just sit inside my castle and wait..

But I wait for nothing..

Because nothing or no one.,

Will ever come...

© 2011 kerri


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Dont we all deserve a Cinderella story? A man who'll come into our lives and make us feel important and loved? Well, we all get one eventually, we just may not get them when we want.

I noticed a teensy-weensy problem:

"There is no prince in shining armor coming to rescue me from my tower"

Cinderella was not trapped in a tower, that was Rapunzel. Unless that was your intention...?

Whatever the case, this was a great write and you just need to rememberthat you'll find your soulmate soon enough. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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kerri
kerri

neverever land, MA



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Hey, im kerri. I love to draw :3 and be with my freinds... and you.. more..

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