Broken Hearts in Crowded Rooms

Homecoming 2012.

The rain cried for you, too,

Through a crowded room,

I finally found you.

Time, it slowed down with you.

Through a crowded room,

Promises were shattered.

Time, it slowed down with you.

You had plans of yours in mind.

Promises were shattered.

Unknown plans fell through,

You had plans of yours in mind.

Broken in a crowded room.

Unknown plans fell through,

Raining, tapping on windows, 

Broken in a crowded room.

Pacing back and forth.

Raining, tapping on windows, 

I finally found you.

Pacing back and forth,

The rain cried for you, too.

Author's Note

This is a pantoum poem of my other poem "The Reality (Part 2)".

Reviews

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This was also full of emotion, very deep and straight from your heart.
This always makes for the best of poems.
Great poem, keep writing :)

[zainul]

The theme and presentation are wonderful.
I enjoyed the piece immensely.

[Miss Kerri]

Thank you so much!

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear poet.:)